الجمعة، 27 ديسمبر، 2013

crafting an effective writer - ch3

#Assignment
Discuss in one paragraph the advantages and disadvantages of the place where you live. Use at least one each of the clauses and phrases you studied in the unit. Also, be sure that you include one each of the four sentence types in your paragraph.  Using your knowledge from Unit 3, use action verbs and active voice, keep your verbs in the same tense, and maintain correct subject-verb agreement. Your description should consist of 9 or more sentences.


The 4th floor , that where I live with my family in a very small apartment

as entering the door , there is a 3×1 meter corridor which has a huge mirror to the right .
at the end of corridor there is the salon which is the wide center hall of the house,
where four chairs are placed randomly and a huge old style couch, centered at the front place.
At the salon ,we usually watch T.V. , eat and meet visitors.
even though its our family place where we gather each day, many unpleasant situations could happen from the visitor's side .

The apartment has many advantages and some few disadvantages

The center hall is our big advantage to be together and have family time each day

The apartment location also at the center of town is a very great coincidence specially for the ease of transportation

And to be at the 4th floor gave us sunshine advantage  all day long which keep the place healthy.

Even if i only use a single bed , my mom keeps two beds in my room in order to use the other bed's bottom as a hidden closet for my future house dishes ,so as state our marriage traditions .

although i barely find a place to stand or sleep in my narrow room ,i do have a big flat screen two laptops and a tablet P.C. .
my room has 4 windows needs More heavy curtains to keep the room privacy , some disadvantage about our apartment its narrowness .

Although been at the center of town is very important its so crowded neighbor and so noisy .

It also has a lot of furniture much huger then the area could bear .

Even if its too narrow I do like it , playing radio over internet on one computer and surfing internet or read on my tablet while drinking hot chocolate is one of my favorite group activity in my room

 I usually think that i may compensate the absence of free space I do feel by the presence of a cyber space.

There its my safe zone where I can do whatever I want apart from the outer world as if I live in an independent place where I can create my own reality.

 To play some sport at the apartment is a big advantage as we own a running machine and few dumbbells.

Inside the kitchen I hide my special henna powder its where I do mix it with herbs to color my hands.

 This is all simple but that's where I belong , that's my world.

Author:

I am a whole universe 

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