الجمعة، 27 ديسمبر 2013

crafting an effective writer - ch2

#Assignment
Drawing from your observation notes and sentences from Journal Writing Assignments 1 and 2, write a paragraph description of the scene you have observed. Use action verbs and active voice in your sentences. Also, keep your verbs in the same tense and maintain correct subject-verb agreement. Your description should consist of 8 or more sentences.  




At the cafe , there were two deaf guys seemed to talk to each other then lately one by one they started to look at a camera and kept talking the sign language .

both of them were wearing a black sleeveless T shirt.
one was sitting his back to the wall and  with a 45° angle facing the camera and passionately drawing a signal in the air looking like talking about the globe

the other guy looks more muscly and sit straight with a 90° angle to the chair keeping his stomach flat .

they got a table between them seats , with two cups of tea , sugar and someone sitting beside them who doesn't show in the scene and doesn't participate in the conversation but he was smoking while was putting ashes constantly in the ashtray .

lately, came the waiter cleaned the table while both of the guys were totally involved with the conversation so they didn't even looked at him.

as a whole them performance was similar to reality tv shows : a sort of mixture between both real conversation of friends and a special performance steering at the camera .


the cafe's name is : the deaf and dumb cafe of Alexandria , for whom who want to visit .

Author:

I am a whole universe 

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